Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Jessica Edmisten

Jessica Edmisten

16 comments:

  1. Olivia Slusher- i like how you got the lights going down a line at an angle like that. an improvement could be to fucus out a little bit so you get the lights at a different angle.

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  2. Lindsey- I like how you angled the picture so you could see how the lights are in a line. It could improve by starting from a different place of the lights so you don't have the building in the background because its distracting.

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  3. Paige Weber- Very awesome angle. Improvement would be to wait til complete darkness so that the light shines better.

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  4. Sarah- i think that the lights are really good because they are lined up, i think that you could have left out some of the grass so it wasnt as distracting.

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  5. Baron Frost- this is a good picture because i like how you zoomed in on the lights and got the sky. What i would have done different is maybe gotten less ground and more sky. but not too much.

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  6. Kassi Brown- I like how you took the picture down on the lights level. i think you should've took it a liittle bit to the side though.

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  7. Trevor Simpson - This shot was taken with a good angle, but you could have made it a close up on just the lights and eliminated the background.

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  8. olivia masters- i like the zoom on the lilghts, the only thing i would change is your starting position so that you dont have a house in the back ground

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  9. Blake Bunch -
    Good: The camera angle
    Bad: should have made sure the lights were level

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  10. Zack Miller- I like the lights and how they are in a row. I also like the sky in the background. To improve this picture you need to take the picture at a earlier time or turn on the flash.

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  11. Makayla Rockey: I really like how you got down on the ground with it so it could be focused on the light. One thing that could be changed is how you can see the green thing that is holding up the light it takes away from the light itself

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  12. Delaney Walsh- i like how you got on the level of the lights. something that would make it better is just focusing on the lights and not the cords too.

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  13. Curtis Burns- I like how you zoomed in and focused on the lights and the sunset also makes this a good picture. To improve it, you could have removed the pole on the right so it was not in the picture.

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  14. Adrian Hunter- it is good because you are ont the level of the lights they guide your eyes outward to the house. it could be improved by cutting out the post the light is next to.

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  15. Olivia Williams- I like the lights in the picture but you could have taken the picture at a different angle.

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  16. Bill Wu: Good picture and nice focus. But next time try low shotspeed instead of high ISO... It can reduce the noise.

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